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Debbie Liu's avatar

EVeryone deserves watermelon. Especially people whose cars been stolen and have got shopping plastic everywhere. I found this piece riveting.

Sarah Davis's avatar

Oh I’m so glad you enjoyed the piece, thank you for reading Debbie!

Jennifer Palmer's avatar

art.... this is like a painting in words. I love it so much. I want to hang it on my wall.

But really???? your car???!!!!

Serra Sewitch-Posey's avatar

Mmm, I love the shift you made to the birds’ perspective. How they’re probably judging us, and rightfully so. So little fucks given. I too always feel vulnerable in a bright house at night, on display. The house I grew up in was on a hill and had a lot of full length windows and sliding glass doors, I always felt like I was in an aquarium.

Kaia Preus's avatar

Sarah! I’m so sorry someone stole your car! That’s awful.

The birds near our house always try to get into our garage. We have to scare them out before we shut it every time.